续写故事，离不开进行情绪和动作的描写，该类描写有很多，在此处总结了一些较为新颖、突出的短语和句型，可供参考。

Mindmap解析

高频短语表达

1. feel a lump in one’s throat：如鲠在喉

【翻译小助手】看着颤抖的妹妹，我感到如鲠在喉。

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2. conceal ones+情绪名词：某人几乎无法掩饰某人的…情绪

【翻译小助手】Sam 几乎无法掩饰他的兴奋。

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3. a mixture of+情绪名词 and 情绪名词：感到既.….又.….

【翻译小助手】他感到既开心又后悔。

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4. pop into ones mind：涌入某人的脑海中/某人突然想起某物

【翻译小助手】妈妈的警告突然涌入她的脑海中。

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5. beyond description：无以言表/说不出话来

【翻译小助手】他的后悔之意无以言表。

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6. a surge of+情绪名词：感到一股/一阵/一丝…

【翻译小助手】她感到一丝放松。

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KEYS:

1. Looking at my trembling sister, I felt a lump in my throat.

2.Sam could hardly conceal his excitement.

3.He felt a mixture of happiness and regret.

4. Mom’s warning popped into her mind.

5. His regret was beyond description.

6. She felt a surge of relief.

高频句式表达积累

1. 人做主语的情绪“外露”

Judging from sb’s voice/eyes/expression/behavior, it was evident that sb was trapped in+情绪名

词

【翻译小助手】从他的眼神中可以看出来，很明显他现在非常紧张。

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2. 物作主语的情绪“外露”( A trace of+情绪名词+could be noticed in sb’s voice)

【翻译小助手】他的声音里透露出一丝紧张。

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3. 多种情绪在内心升腾奔涌

Sb felt a mixture of 情绪1+and 情绪 2+welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.

【翻译小助手】惊喜和感激在我的内心翻腾。

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4. 流眼泪(Tears of+情绪名词+welled up in ones eyes)

【翻译小助手】当她向司机感谢他的帮助时，她的眼睛里噙满了感激的泪水，而他只是暖暖

一笑。

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5. 动作链:知道了…之后，没有…，而是…(Knowing sth, instead of doing sth, sb did sth)

【翻译小助手】了解事情的经过后，父亲并没有责骂他们，而是鼓励他们再试一次。

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6. 动作发生先后:…之后，某人…(Having done sth,Having done sth,sb did sthsb did sth)

【翻译小助手】上了直升机之后，她无数次感谢他们。

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7. 没有任何事物可以.…(Nothing could do sth)

【翻译小助手】没有任何事物可以表达我们对你无比纯洁心灵的最深切的感激。

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8. 无灵主语+有灵谓语

【翻译小助手】突然，一股强烈的喜悦涌向我。

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9. so that倒装句(So+形容词+be sb that+完整句子)

【翻译小助手】他如此激动以至于说不出话来。

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10. 强调句(It was..that…)

【翻译小助手】正是Amanda的坚持和对她妹妹的爱带来了一个如此和谐美好的家庭一幕。

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KEYS:

1. Judging from his eyes, it was evident that he was trapped in nervousness.

2. A trace of nervousness could be noticed in his voice

3.I felt a mixture of thrill and gratitude welling up in my heart and surging through me

4. Tears of appreciation welled up in her eyes as she thanked the driver for his help, but he just

smiled warmly.

5.Knowing what had happened instead of scolding them the father encouraged them to cook

breakfast again.

6. Having got onboard the helicopter she thanked everyone million times.

7. Nothing can express our deepest gratitude for your purest heart.

8. Suddenly, a strong sense of delight came over me

9.So excited was he that he couldn’t say a word.

10.It was Amanda’s persistence and love for her sister that brought about such a harmonious and

sweet family scene.