写作题目-22年天河区一模

假如你是李华，在学校举办的“我志愿，我服务，我快乐，我成长”的志愿者活动中，你参加了以下多项活动。请根据下图的提示，在班级分享会上谈谈你的经历和感受。

注意：（1）词数80-120个左右（文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥）

（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Dear classmates,

Good morning, everyone! I am happy to share my experience of working as a volunteer with you.________

写作分析

首先，我们需要确定写作时态。考虑到李华是在分享会上讲述自己的过去经历和感受，用过去时描述经历，用现在时描述感受。

接下来是人称。因为写作的主体是李华本人，所以应该使用第一人称单数，即”I”。

关于短语，我们需要注意谈论自己的经历和感受，所以可以使用以下短语：participate in/take part in, community service, share with, feel, experience, volunteer activity等。

最后是句型。在描述自己的经历时，可以使用一些句型如下：

1、When I participated in the community service activity…
2、At Guangzhou Metro Museum, I was able to experience…
3、During my visit to the nursing home, I had the opportunity to…
4、While volunteering at Children’s Hospital, I was able to…

参考范文一（考场类）：

Dear classmates,

Good morning, everyone! I am happy to share my experience of working as a volunteer with you. I have taken part in many voluntary activities these days and I have learnt a lot.

First of all, I helped sort out waste in our local community this winter holiday. I taught my neighbors to put the rubbish into correct rubbish bins. I think this activity is meaningful because it can make our environment cleaner and better. (1.5) Besides, I volunteered to be a guide in Guangzhou Metro Museum last month. By introducing the history of the metro to the visitors, I not only learnt about the development of our city but also improved my confidence to give a speech in public. (1.5) In addition, I went to the nursing house with my friends every Sunday afternoon. Talking with the old is interesting and it’s our duty to care more about the elderly. (1.5) The most unforgettable experience is visiting a children’s hospital yesterday. I taught some disabled children to sing because I hope music can bring them joy and peace. (1.5) 

This is what I have done as a volunteer and I sincerely expect more and more people can join us to help build a better world. That’s all. Thanks for your listening.

参考范文二（拓展类）：

Dear classmates,
Good morning, everyone! I am happy to share my experience of working as a volunteer with you. In this “I volunteer, I serve, I am happy, and I grow” activity held by our school, I had the privilege of being a volunteer in different places. I’d like to share my experiences with you.

Firstly, I joined a waste sorting activity in the local community. During the activity, we collected recyclables and hazardous waste from households, sorted them and transported them to the designated location. I felt that such an activity not only helped the environment but also educated me more on waste reduction and recycling. I think it is important for each and every one of us to participate in environmental protection.

Secondly, I participated in volunteer work at the Guangzhou Metro Museum. My job was to give a brief introduction to the history, art, and science of metro transportation in Guangzhou. I showed visitors some of the valuable exhibits in the museum and explained the cultural significance of the metro system. It was a great experience for me because I got to learn many new facts about the city’s public transportation and its history.

Thirdly, I visited a nursing home, where I helped with various chores such as cleaning, cooking, and entertaining the elderly. I was surprised to see that the elderly residents were very responsive to our attention and care. They shared their stories with us, listened to us, and showered us with love. I felt a sense of fulfillment in being able to bring joy and comfort to these people.

Lastly, I assisted in the Children’s Hospital by reading to the young patients and playing games with them. I was touched by how optimistic and cheerful the children were despite their illness. I felt that it was our duty to encourage and inspire them to persevere through their suffering. I hope that my presence was able to brighten their day even if by just a little bit.

In conclusion, volunteering has given me the opportunity to serve others, to learn about the community, and most importantly, to grow as a person. I hope that my experiences have inspired all of you to also take part in volunteer work and contribute to society. Thank you for listening.

Mindmap 解析

写作-志愿者活动最先出现在Clarissa Study。